In order to get some feedback on my magazine design so far I showed some peers the design and asked for their input on what I can change.
Wider kern on 'IBS' title
make pink colour paler to bring the colour of the dress to the foreground. The green of the plants in the photo overshadows the pink
editors letter page spread out more.
GUT HEALTH > GUT
HEALTH
do you need pink banner on cover?
contents capital C
like creators page
about IBS page all left aligned except contact details (change)
like photos and illustrations
stress title works well overlapping red line - apply to about IBS
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