Display Wizard - feedback and adjustments

To get some feedback on the design I mocked it up into a banner mock-up and sent to my peers to ask for some of their insight into how I could improve the design.

'I would cap lock ‘ranked no.1’ and ‘in the whole uk’ and give it a little wider kern than the pre set'

I made this adjustment, and decided to capitalise the 'best university facilities' section too, as this is one of the other selling points used on the banner so should be the same across 'ranked' and this section. I also changed the 'no.1' to '#1' as this is larger recognised as the symbol for number as opposed to 'no.' which could be misconstrued by some.

Other feedback was to 'up the hue and brightness and stuff it looks a bit dull for gold', which I did on the mock up before adjusting the actual document. By altering the hue and saturation of the document, this made the gold more yellow, which made it appear more of a real gold, as opposed to the original mock up which features more of a copper gold. This is due to using photographs that were unused in the previous project, and therefore unedited.